T3+Writing

__Wednesday 14 September__

__WALT__: Follow the features of a recount

Recount: Retells past events in the order they occured.

S.C. - Recall past events
 * Use personal pronouns - (I, We)
 * Has an introduction
 * Has a conclusion
 * Is written in past tense
 * Has sequenced order
 * Tell us when, what, where - introduction personal comments

Conjunctions to connect time (firstly, Shortly and next) Adjectives- Big Nouns- Climbing wall, Sam Verb- run

Day 1: Tramp, Cook own meal, Set up rooms, night walk, spotlight

Day 2: Swimming, Loop track ( bush walk), Firelighting, ABL, Art, Burma Trail, Spotlight

Day 3: Activity day 1, spotlight, possum hunting, swimming, Bombfire

Day 4: Activity Day 2, Spotlight, Camp concert

Day 5: Clean up, eel, Clash of camp, Scavanger Hunt, HOME!

__Monday 22 August__

My Dream House! My dream house dream house is $30,0000 and that’s where the luxury starts. My luxury starts with my massive front door and the tinted windows. Once you step inside you feel like your in a white palace. When you look up there’s a massive diamond chandelier. When you walk through to the kitchen you will find a clear top bench with a 2 door fridge/ freezer and a humungous dining table for when I have heaps of guests round to have dinner, Lunch of Breakfast. When you venture up the clear stair case you will find you self in my Lounge and in one door there’s my room and in the other a big Bathroom and a spare room for my guests. Outside there is a 24 meter length pool with a 2 meter depth. Upstairs off the balcony there’s a beautiful view of the sunny beach’s of Miami.

__Tuesday 23 August __ Once apon a time there lived a sophisticated hippopotomas in a gold castle as big as the state of Texas, in the town of New Castle, England. This hippo is not a ussual hippo he was a world champion at solving the unsolvable. He found the puzzles easy as pie, He was as big as the queen of englands limozine. One day when he went to go get another puzzle out of the puzzle cupboard and there was a crash on the ground, all the puzzle’s have fallen out of the cupboard and onto the ground. He was so angry he went on a rampage and smashed the chair against the wall. //Wheres your W.A.L.T and S.C? this is a good start nice setting of the scene. A giant hippo who likes to make puzzles, that would be a sight to see. :) you could have included more features such as, when the puzzle pieces feel to the ground, was there any noise? did they fall fast? slow? // //Next learning steps: // //Work on really painting a picture in your mind, so if someone were to hear your story they could draw a picture showing exactly what was in your mind. // //Continue to use the features throughout your story, you started off using them but by the end they had disappeared? // //Miss Connor //